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James Kennedy posted a comment on Thursday 28th May 2020 11:37pm

I know The Exchange is a Vault story but I'm hoping it gets completed.

I like it-- it's interesting-- and I like the interaction between Lily & Luna.

Thank you.

Kairan1979 posted a comment on Thursday 28th May 2020 1:29pm

As always, Luna never fails to get my attention.

I hope to see more character development for Lily in the next chapter.

lwj2 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 10:43pm

Intriguing, thanks for sharing it.

mwinter posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 8:40pm

Once again you've grabed my attention withyour story telling. It's quite interesting to read your Luna.

BJH posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 3:20pm

I have to say, every time I think I know where you are going with this story, Luna goes and does something quite Luna-ish and takes me in a totally different direction. Now, instead of Lily being someone who can take harry from Petunia, she's far enough in the past to do something about Voldemort directly and make the entire series obsolete, or maybe just change Sirius enough to save Harry, or maybe do something Luna-ish again and I haven't the foggiest of where it going.

It's just so refreshing to not be able to predict where it will go.

Thanks for the gift.

BJH

Kokopelli replied:

This story is so AU that by the time we get to the third or fourth chapter, you won't be able to see the original timeline, although Luna can go back and forth.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 3:16pm

Interesting chapter and thanks for sharing!

Kokopelli replied:

You're most welcome.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 12:59pm

I like Luna, she has a very refreshing, albeit sometimes confusing, point of view.

Kokopelli replied:

Me too.

The Seeker posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 12:10pm

Very atmospheric feeling to the chapter. Luna was Luna, so it was interesting to see Lily mostly recessive. Especially puzzling is that they 'might be a bit late' for the transfer. Will we see another chapter soon? Regardless, thanks for this.

Kokopelli replied:

No promises as to timing.

rgshea96789 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 10:40am

Luna usually has the best timing. Oh, well. I guess getting murdered can throw anybody off. Thanks for writing.

Kokopelli replied:

Luna's still learning how these things work. "It's not like this job came with an illustrated manual," she said once.

amulder posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 7:27am

I've read so much fanfic that I don't even know anymore if Luna saying "oh, pooh" is fanon or canon. I still find it charming.

Interesting waystation scene.

Couple of interesting comments though from Luna on Harry... The prologue did not give any hints as to what Harry might have done as MoD, but now... Luna said Harry "always" arrives in Kings Cross. Is this story going to be all Lily, or will we have more snippets from Harry's adventures as an adult MoD ??

thanks

Kokopelli replied:

Hello, Art.  No, Harry's part of this story is over, the main story arc is Lily going back to the 1920's to take care of Riddle and Dumbldore.  In this story's background, Harry has gone back to the train station two or three times since the episode we saw in Deathly Hallows. 

Jason9 posted a comment on Thursday 21st May 2020 9:28am

As always, original and interesting - looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Kokopelli replied:

I dropped another chapter this morning.  Thanks for your kind words.

Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Thursday 19th March 2020 6:15pm

I've said it more than once and I will say it again, what makes this fascinating is not just the interplay between Susan and Harry but the characer of Paxton. I guess I am a Paxton fanboy, more's the pity. I suspect that he is effectively your self-insert, but, if so, very skillfully done.

BTW, my recommendation for a book of the moment is Love in the Time of Cholera by one of my favorite latin american fabulists....

Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Sunday 8th March 2020 5:57pm

Fascinating premise. Can't help but wonder as to what comes next. Still, I would love to see Paxton ride again. As the only active writer remaining on this site, want to take the opportunity to thank you for your marvelous works...Now if you could only get Jeconnais to finish up his Addams family story, you would be a god on earth. Thanks for everything.

Kokopelli replied:

I too would like to see Jeconais to finish Addams, but I suspect that it will be a while before Tim returns to writing.

BerniCr posted a comment on Saturday 7th March 2020 8:52am

I love the concept of this story. I look forward to seeing any future bits you write on it.

lwj2 posted a comment on Friday 6th March 2020 4:19pm

I enjoyed this, I hope you'll eventually pursue turning it into a longer story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Micky0077 posted a comment on Friday 6th March 2020 11:21am

An interesting idea, I am very curious to see what could happen next. Don't believe I have seen anything else with all these elements.

Kairan1979 posted a comment on Friday 6th March 2020 10:40am

Another woman? Is it going to be Kendra or Ariana Dumbledore?

Kokopelli replied:

Nope - not even close.

amulder posted a comment on Friday 6th March 2020 6:48am

How far back is the question... Followed by whom... I find Luna to be powerful and fascinating here!

Kokopelli replied:

1920's - Task one - the Riddle problem, Task two - the Dumbeldore problem

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th March 2020 12:51am

Odd chapter but interesting and thanks for sharing!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th March 2020 12:41am

Great chapter and thanks for shairng!