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TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 31st December 2006 5:50pm for Valley of the Shadow - Part II

Good one.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 2:26pm for Valley of the Shadow - Part II

Outstanding.

gunny

AK posted a comment on Sunday 21st May 2006 1:32pm for Valley of the Shadow - Part II

I don't get this chapter why is there an Epilogue in the middle of it???

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 5:28am for Valley of the Shadow - Part II

Enjoyable chapter. :-)

Small continuity error: You had Snape teaching potions earlier (when Harry fed the two firsties the answers) and now he's teaching defense.

Kokopelli replied:

Fixed that - thanks.

The Resident posted a comment on Monday 8th May 2006 5:40pm for Valley of the Shadow - Part II

As much as I am enjoying your wonderful story, I find myself at somewhat of a loss. This story seems to be the middle part of a larger story. Two OC characters have no back reference, certain words (cough) Krulach(cough) are not translated, certain mentions of dragons, etc. Is there a previous story that fills in the blanks? Any help would be welcome. In the meantime, I will try to muddle along and try to figure out as much as I can from the existing context.

Wooster posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2005 1:29pm for Valley of the Shadow - Part II

Lovely. Absolutely lovely. I'd love to read the last little story here, but my dad, (and my rebelliously sick body) are insisting I go to bed. I can't even REMEMBER the last time I went to bed at 8:30. meh. Well, g'night, and great chappie.