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Kairan1979 posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 3:24pm

Interesting story so far.

Rowle can be a problem, especially considering Alice is now a civilian.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 3:03pm

An intriguimg approach to Alice moving on with her life.

bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 10:56am

This is fun so far. As you noted, pretty much AU to the whole series.

I'm glad you're writing again. For a long time there have been no updates at all -- I think it's been over a year. So seeing a new story is great!

robbspotter posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 10:53am

wicked thansk, just love the way Moony plots, more when you can pretty please

gmanfatman posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 10:41am

this is a nice update

rgshea96789 posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 8:07am

This is a great story! I think Remus shold push a trail for Narcissa first. That way she can testify to Rowle and get him removed before he can harm Sirius.

Please keep writing.

Micky0077 posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 1:56am

Still cruising along very nicely, still looking forward to each new chapter, great job. Loving the pacing, even if I do crave seeing Sirius out and Harry safe.

a_wanderer posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 10:51pm

I like the subtle construction of this world and Magical British culture.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 9:02pm

Even the Light side of the Wizarding World is dark.

Kokopelli replied:

Uh,yeah,that's how things work.

dennisud posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 8:46pm

Will other lesser families be involved as in Weasley, Lovegood and maybe McGonagall?

Oh and Granger too, on the nonmagical side!

Kokopelli replied:

Minerva M. gets a few minutes of screen time in Chapter 6, but the other families, not so much.

Jason9 posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 8:15pm

It's awesome to be getting regular updates on a story I find myself enjoying quite a lot. Everything - the world, the characters, the set pieces - are all so believable in the realm of this universe that I was actually a little surprised by some of the things that aren't canon (if that makes any sense at all.) But I'm reminded that this isn't canon because I'm not tearing my hair out in frustration by characters doing completely bone headed things just to drive the narrative, or so completely out of character that I just have to put the story down and walk away. Seriously enjoying this story, and as unrealistic as it might be, I hope to see it continue for a long time. Thanks for your hard work and effort!

Kokopelli replied:

Chapter 6 is in the can, it's a big chapter.  After that, maybe three more chapters?  I've proven that I stink at estimating, so I'm not going to even try to make a forecast for this one.  I know where the story is going, and more or less how I'm going to get there, but every now and then a character will start doing things that I hadn't planned on.

JoeMcDermott posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 7:12pm

Please keep on with this. This is another one better written than jkr. (She can go on for as many as 300 pages with

no one learning anything which could be accomplished in a page or so.)

My thanks to Jeconais as well

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 6:17pm

I have no doubt that Sirius would be killed and then Narcissa would be raped. Living at the Lodge with weres that can transform when they want would offer quite a bit of protection.

Kokopelli replied:

News flash,Narcissa has already been assaulted, she was just not very forthcoming about it.

Cu posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 4:18pm

If Mrs. Malfoy thinks Big Band Jazz is on the decline in 1981, she might want to check out the recently founded Vienna Art Orchestra or composers/arrangers like Thad Jones, Mel Lewis or Bob Brookmeyer. If she manages to leave Azkaban, that is.

Rumour has it that Big Band aficionados should keep a very close ear on a promising young lady named Maria Schneider. By the time the Triwizard Tournament is reinstated she could be ready to raise to the top of the crop.

Kokopelli replied:

I'll make that suggestion to Narcissa next time we talk, but right now she's a little busy (although she's also bored out of her skull).

uthamm posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 3:38pm

Well done! I always wondered how different Harry Potter would be with a few competent adults around . . . and between Alice and Remus, this is shaping up to fit that bill very nicely. Thanks for the time and thanks for sharing!

Kokopelli replied:

That's the problem in JKR's world - there's no responsible adults in his corner.

ThadiusZho posted a comment on Sunday 2nd July 2017 6:15pm

As usual, compeling story, good plot twists. You're in great shape, Kokopelli. Keep up the good work

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 2nd July 2017 10:38am

Great writing with an interesting collection of scenes. I was sorry to see Frank go.

Well done and thank you.

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 1st July 2017 7:35pm

Fine chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

a_wanderer posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2017 8:15pm

Okay I'm hooked.

Kokopelli replied:

heh heh heh...

pianomouse10 posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2017 5:18pm

I am really enjoying your story, I love that you are expanding on Remus' character. Thank you for sharing this.