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Wanderer posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2017 7:26pm

Loving the details!

Wanderer posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2017 7:02pm

Damn that was entertaining! :-) I managed to forget to check a certain email address, and look at the Treasure Trove that I have found, I can't wait for more.

robbspotter posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2017 3:55pm

is she good, is she bad, talk about leave it on a cliffie, thanks love it more when you can pretty please

zonianx posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2017 2:42pm

At first I thought that Narcissa was going it alone and was going to muck up the escape. I see that she and Remus are playing a deeper game here but for the life of me I can't figure out what Narcissa will get out of this. Unless it is just House of Black help later on.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2017 12:15am

*snicker* I love the level of machinations here as House Black moves by unusual means, certainly not those expected by wizarding society, to protect their own. I quite suspect there will be quite the storm when the two escapes are found and I strongly doubt anyone will realized the true means (poor Bellatrix, she's actually going to be accused of something she didn't do).

Kokopelli replied:

_Two_ escapes?  Who said anything about two escapes?  Yes, there will be a big storm from this...

Alice Zecco posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2017 10:48pm

Love this story! Thanks for the great read!

Kokopelli replied:

You're welcome.

gmanfatman posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2017 8:37pm

nice update.

Kokopelli replied:

How is it that gmanfatman leaves such a skinny review?

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2017 7:49pm

So, will Narcissa take the chance to leave, or is she doing this for Sirius and Remus so they can in turn help her legally?

Kokopelli replied:

Narcissa is playing her own game.

dennisud posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2017 7:11pm

I like this chapter and Narcissa in particular. Very Slytherin yet also wanting to help herself and her house. Let's see and hope the next chapter won't take too long as you have us by the nutbags in wait until then! ;-)

dennisud

Kokopelli replied:

Chapter 7 is almost done - so sit easy.  Narcissa is playing to protect Narcissa's interests.  Don't vex her, it's not good for your health.

Kairan1979 posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2017 5:34pm

Glad to see Alice isn't opposing Remus' plan to spring Sirius out, and points out to him that he needs an alibi.

Nice twist with Narcissa escaping.

Kokopelli replied:

Alice is a key player in this drama.  Narcissa is doing something else, though...

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2017 5:25pm

Great writing with an interesting expansion of the universe to include the Danish.

Kokopelli replied:

Going back to the time of the Saxons, there was always a lot of cross-polination from the Norse tribes.  Isle of Man was Viking before it was English, which is the historic basis of the Danish connection.

seadragonlady posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2017 1:52pm

This is a great story thank you for sharing it.

Kokopelli replied:

You're quite welcome.

uthamm posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2017 1:50pm

Wow! I totally did not see that coming! Not seeing how Narcissia gets away with this, unless she oblivates Rowle? I don't think she is going to escape with Sirus . . . or is she? AAAHH! Cliffhanger!

Love seeing Remus gathering allies. Thanks for sharing!

Kokopelli replied:

Narcissa has a different solution for Rowle.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2017 11:48am

Nice twist! I was wondering how she would be plugged into the guards gossip enough to hear about his cell being left unlocked that night.

I can just picture the next two books in this series...

"Remus Lupin and the unsought harem" followed by the ever popular "Sirius Black and the ulcer of jealousy"

Kokopelli replied:

Remus is not accumulating a harem - fan club maybe, but not a harem.

mwinter posted a comment on Wednesday 12th July 2017 8:08pm

Interesting. Awaiting more.

huskerfan posted a comment on Monday 10th July 2017 10:49pm

Really enjoying the story so far, I like the characterization youve given Remus. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here!

John Wilburn posted a comment on Monday 10th July 2017 8:39am

You probably already know that "blitz" is German for lightening, but on the off chance you didn't I thought I would let you know. I'm really enjoying this story

Thanks

John

jilumasam posted a comment on Monday 10th July 2017 4:48am

I've really enjoyed this story so far...I should, at the very least, remember my password to this site so I can review in a much more timely manner. I look forward to seeing more of this!

Wolfric posted a comment on Monday 10th July 2017 1:42am

I am enjoying your fine story. Thanks for writing. W.

Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 6:57pm

Thanks for sharing this. I am greatly enjoying the originality, especially your take on Remus Lupin.