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Jewel34 posted a comment on Saturday 16th February 2019 3:09pm

Fascinating expansion of cannon :)

Kokopelli replied:

Not exactly an expansion.  Years ago when I wrote more fanfic, I tried to be extremely close to canon.  Now, not so much.

Jimbocous posted a comment on Tuesday 12th February 2019 6:01am

Thanks for a great read!

Kokopelli replied:

You are most welcome

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Thursday 7th February 2019 11:43am

Quite a mystery that Remus has been involved in with both Sirus and Harry. Thanks for sharing!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Thursday 7th February 2019 10:49am

Good first chapter and thanks for sharing!

Rowenasheir posted a comment on Wednesday 6th June 2018 1:41pm

I can imagine Remus using PP blood to make a leather mouse (The Voodoo comment!) with catnip and gving it to Mrs Norris or meowGonagal for Yule! In Akhaban or not! It would be too dangerous for young wolves to paly with!

Off takes with a confrontation between AD and Aunty daisy would be fun! there is no way he would touch the BWL or the spare NL.

I can also imagine the chaos when the two boys are outside on the full moon playing with the wolves in total safety as they are Remus' cubs!

Kokopelli replied:

Great ideas for stories - why don't you write them?

 

Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2018 2:46pm

A truely wonderful story, original in almost every detail, about how the whole issue(s) which JKR spun into seven books about endless child abuse (IMO) should have been handled. Well done, and a very nice ending to the whole thing.

LuxEterna posted a comment on Thursday 21st December 2017 8:10am

very nice story i loved it

though i think i read a story with arry raised by a werewolfpack that could transform at will because they were in snych with their animal side (and had a reasonable and nice fenrir greyback)

and i guess that all the children are very eager to learn how to be animagi that are slightly dissapointed if they arent wolves ;D

fyrecat posted a comment on Wednesday 18th October 2017 11:21pm

Quite a fun story. Thank you!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2017 9:42pm

Fun ending to this story. Thanks for sharing!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2017 9:15pm

Nice bit of slight of hand done for the trail. Thanks for sharing!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2017 8:09pm

It's great that Remus has formulated a plan to release Sirius. I do have to wonder how they plan to get him a trial if they can't while he is in prison. Thanks for sharing!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2017 6:44pm

Good chapter with a terrible ending. I'm sure that Harry is rather confused why Moony showed up and then left him again. Thanks for sharing!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2017 6:14pm

It's wonderful how devious the Goblins can be, lol. Good chapter and thanks for sharing!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2017 5:14pm

Wow, quite the full days for Remus. Nice save for the Longbottoms. Thanks for sharing!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2017 1:35pm

Great first chapter and interesting story concept. Thanks for sharing!

bowers.larry@gmail.com posted a comment on Sunday 3rd September 2017 9:36am

Excellent!!! I enjoyed your story and your original characters. Your thoery on werewolf transformation was great. I also enjoyed much of the background such as places and islands and such. I looked up many things and locations. I find that a plus.

Thank you for sharing your time, talents and imagination with us readers.

Kokopelli replied:

Such a thoughtful review - thanks.  Certain things I find hard - like character names.  I try to make the geography and the backgrounds work.  I'd have a hard time creating a 100% new universe, because I'd have to make maps and create histories - too much like work if you ask me.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story - it was fun to write.  Certain things (like Daisy) just tended to take off in a direction all their own.

crystalscan2056 posted a comment on Sunday 13th August 2017 2:39pm

Heck of a good story! Thank you for writing it. I know this site isnt as well trafficked as it once was, and I missed it. Keep it up!

millercommamatt posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2017 2:41pm

It's been a while since I last journeyed into the storied landscape of Kokopelli's mind. I'm glad I did. There's less and less HP fan fiction to read these days and good writing has almost dried up. Thanks for the oasis.

Kokopelli replied:

Thanks for the kind words.  There's a few bright spots, and then there's the frustratingly incomplete stories.  One reason I try to write shorter pieces these days is so that I can reasonably be sure to finish it before life interferes.

robbspotter posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2017 3:26pm

ooohhhh like the probable end, brilliant thanks, up for more if you get inspired thanks

Kokopelli replied:

It's awfully tempting to write some one-shots with Daisy.

 

Ken Warner posted a comment on Monday 31st July 2017 5:53am

Thank you for sharing a delightful story, much improved by the logical thinking of the Marauders instead of the evil of Dumbledore.

Your version of Alice is delightful in her practicality and kindness, the subtle way that you sketched out and colored in the her character is a skillful bit of writing.

Daisy is a pure wonder, Galatea at her very best.

Warmest regards

Kokopelli replied:

One of the big challenges for any fan fic writer in the HP lane is how to portray Dumbledore.  Is he incompetent?  Is he manipulative and evil? JKR definately writes like he's a good guy, but there's a lot of death and destruction in his wake.  Alice is, of course, a blank slate, but I tried to do justice to her character, with Mom winning out in the end.  Daisy?  I had no idea that Daisy would grow as a character when I first wrote her into a scene, but she's a good fit with the story arc, so away she went.