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ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2017 5:14pm for Chapter the Second

Wow, quite the full days for Remus. Nice save for the Longbottoms. Thanks for sharing!

Wanderer posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2017 7:26pm for Chapter the Second

Loving the details!

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2017 11:26am for Chapter the Second

Dumbles was in everything up to his neck, which is why he did all his jobs so poorly.

Amamama posted a comment on Wednesday 31st May 2017 4:03pm for Chapter the Second

Ahh, I do love your storybuilding. Loads of interesting information here, I'm looking forward to see how this pans out. And no, I dodn't think this would be a complete rewrite, more that Alice not being tortured into madness gives me hope that both Neville and Harry will grow up feeling safe and nurtured (more so now, with Alice as Harry's godmother). I know your focus is on Remus, and I must say I like what I see.

Richard6154 posted a comment on Wednesday 31st May 2017 7:53am for Chapter the Second

Nice to see you back here wrtiting. A great start to the story. I always enjoy a good plot with inteligent characters acting reasonably.

Thanks for sharing and looking forward to more. :)

Dave Harris posted a comment on Monday 29th May 2017 5:56am for Chapter the Second

Interesting start.

I am wondering why Remus would have had to make a whole pot of coffee, though. Back in the eighties it would have been more likely the other way around in my experience - you would make a pot of tea, but a single cup of (instant) coffee.

jacmarie87 posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2017 5:57pm for Chapter the Second

Very interesting beginning! It looks like a lot of different things can happen with this idea.

starhanyou posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2017 12:27am for Chapter the Second

Really enjoying this!

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 27th May 2017 2:01am for Chapter the Second

I am enjoying your fine story. I didn't get an email for the first chapter, so this one kind of surprized me but pleasently. Thanks for writing. W.

Michael10 posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 10:31pm for Chapter the Second

considered a good cow? can't wait to see what's next.

thank you for sharing and keep up the good work

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 10:06pm for Chapter the Second

Now this is a definitely different take on things and I reckon the way matters are progressing that a lot of Dumbledore's plans are going to be quietly upended before Harry ever arrives at Hogwarts. This is a fun ride and I'm quite enjoying it.

dianaanne posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 8:32pm for Chapter the Second

This is a unique twist to Remus' story. I like it!

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 7:58pm for Chapter the Second

Well, part of being a Steward is to help the Head, so Remus investigating what is going on with Sirius is par. I hope that he can at least get Harry free and out of Albus' clutches...and then maybe out of Britain.

Antosha posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 5:32pm for Chapter the Second

Gumshoe Moony. Nice!

As always, a pleasure to read one of your tales. And I love how the one small change — Sirius hiring Remus — has led to a ripple of changes across the story. I look forward to seeing where you lead us!

Jason9 posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 4:58pm for Chapter the Second

As usual, I enjoy your versions of the HP universe characters quite a bit more than the originals. Great to read another of your stories, and definitely enjoying this one so far. It's the smallest things that leave me eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Thanks for writing and publishing!

Micky0077 posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 8:57am for Chapter the Second

So far, a very interesting developing of the story. Looking forward to seeing how this continues.

Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 3:54pm for Chapter the Second

And the plot thickens. You've got me hooked.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 3:25pm for Chapter the Second

A well written development of the story with a particulary insightful take on what hapens in the days after Tom's fall.

aresofrecluce posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 3:13pm for Chapter the Second

Hey Kokopelli,

Good to see you posting again. I've really enjoyed these two chapters so far.

Like you, I was also disappointed with the canon (and most fanfiction) Remus. I also tend not to go looking for "before Harry's at hogwarts stories".

This story brought me in immediately. I am excited to see where this competent Remus (and alive for now Longbottoms) goes.

Eagerly anticipating,

AresOfRecluce