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Riegert8 posted a comment on Monday 19th September 2011 6:05pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

I found Jacques Fuso attitude disturbing,I could understand that he want Gabrielle off the case but asking that Gabrielle kick out of the city is another. It leave me to wonder if he hate Gabrielle, or he just hate her race.

pfeil posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 2:06pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

Near-human catholics, right.

*rolls eyes*

Kokopelli replied:

Why not?

Jabe Washburn1 posted a comment on Thursday 8th March 2007 9:08am for Lost Lambs - Part I

Good stuff as always. I wish I'd started reading your work earlier. Then again, I probably wouldn't be reading it right now if I had.

saugart posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 9:16am for Lost Lambs - Part I

A pleasure to read this next chapter. Thank you for writing.

I was touched. It felt as if I were there.

gaul2000 posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 5:39am for Lost Lambs - Part I

chapter was good, enjoyed it, byes

Prince Charon posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 2:02am for Lost Lambs - Part I

Very interesting. I like how their pacing themselves.

Thank you for the update.

More soon, please.

Graup posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 2:06pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

Hmmm - transition chapter, but you kept it interesting.

snuffles007 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 10:45am for Lost Lambs - Part I

Great chapter! I liked the surprise engagement. Keep the updates coming!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 9:54am for Lost Lambs - Part I

Interesting!! This is going to be a somewhat different "courtship" since they've already agreed on the basics. I rather suspect, though, that bweing teamed together in the field is going to expose them to aspects of each other they normally would not have seen for some while.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 9:15am for Lost Lambs - Part I

Hmmm... Not the way I expect you'd end up going. I was expecting either an interruption of their romancing or a skip ahead to after they'd solved the case.

This different, and quite probably better. :-)

I was a bit surprised that Harry let all of his reservations from the previous chapter go quite that quickly. But the proposal by note passing was very cute.

All in all, excellent. Thanks for sharing it with us.

UdderPD posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 6:54am for Lost Lambs - Part I

This was excellent, it did however have one serious error. It was only a quarter of the required length.

Keep up the good work.

TTFN UdderPD

Viridian posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 5:44am for Lost Lambs - Part I

Nicely done. That was one of the funnier marriage proposals I'vee seen. You'd think Gabby would've anticipated that though... but the shocke factor was worth it.

The memories from Gabby's Beuxbatons days were handled nicely as well. Harry is being more than just a prize in the relationship, which is good.

Looking forward to the next installment!

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 5:19am for Lost Lambs - Part I

Another fantabulous chapter. I look forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the good work

Thanks

'Mione

haphazard1 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 2:37am for Lost Lambs - Part I

Another excellent chapter -- I'm enjoying this story quite a lot.

The scribbling back and forth proposal was delightful, and I like the way you're writing Gabrielle. I'll look forward to seeing the results of Harry's "tasks".

CootiePatootie posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 1:41am for Lost Lambs - Part I

What a sweet proposal. Your take on the tracking/empathy/Veela is quite interesting, though it does make sense. Tracking someone would work best if you were intimately familiar with his or her signature. Normally that intimacy would come with a deep personal relationship, but I can certainly see the logic of using an Occlumency-like skill (the Veela power) to get it. Cool, in other words!

Harry's such a good boyfriend/fiance. Make sure he stays that way!

I like the bit about just being engaged that very day; the erotic lump of magic is pretty funny too.

Cheers,

Cassie

Amamama posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 11:32pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

They do move fast when they first decide, don't they? Lovely fic, as usual I really enjoy all the layers you have in you cake. Right now I could really use a RL Tracker as my cousin has gone missing... you don't happen to have a Gabrielle up your sleeve, do you? Guess not. One thing's for sure - I have a very good idea about the way Madame Artzai feels.

Thanks for sharing - it's good to have something else to focus on.

DiverSam posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 11:27pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

Very good. I love the engagement scene.

Mayjest posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 10:53pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

When you get bitten you just don't stop churning them out, do you? Another nice chapter. Would have prefered a bit more info on the plot, it seemed this one was more setting up the next chapter than anything else, although I suppose I should have got that from the 'part 1'. I wouldn't mind hearing more of the back story around Trackers and Aurors, it seems there is some bad blood between them, and having Veela powers is enough to make anyone jealous.

Kokopelli replied:

If I were intending to write another 200k word story, I'd choke my readers on backstory, but here I'm going for a more spare style akin to short stories.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 9:12pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

extremely powerful chapter - you do such a marvelous job of expressing the emotions bubbling underneath the surface of the characters that I am left stunned.
thanks for re-awakening my sense of wonder
warmest regards

Chris1 posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 7:00pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

Nice story :) The marriage proposal was hilarious :D

Chris