Lost and Found Trilogy
Lost & Found - Part I
pfeil posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 1:23pm for Lost & Found - Part I
Harry needs to get a clue. He's had Hermione and Gabrielle alone in a tent and done nothing :|
Jabe Washburn1 posted a comment on Wednesday 7th March 2007 8:46am for Lost & Found - Part I
Great start. And I'm not just saying that because you're reviewing my work at this time. As I told you in an email, I hadn't read any of your work so far. This seemed like a good place (and a good time) to start.
I look forward to the rest of it... which I'm going to read right now.
the_goblets posted a comment on Tuesday 9th January 2007 3:30pm for Lost & Found - Part I
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Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 8:27am for Lost & Found - Part I
The 'visit' with Ginny did to me just what you thought it might.
We do get wrapped up in our heroes and heroines, don't we?
Nightbreak posted a comment on Saturday 5th August 2006 6:26pm for Lost & Found - Part I
Oh, thank *God*, more Harry/Gabrielle. And wonderful H/G/L interaction on the other side. I've often wondered how to do that second bit properly, but I won't have to wonder any longer.
Viridian posted a comment on Saturday 5th August 2006 12:17pm for Lost & Found - Part I
Nice... the dream served as a nice bit of catharsis, which makes any changes in Harry's habits much more believable.
If Harry was alone as much as it sounded like lately, I didn't expect him to be so articulate at first... or did the dream sort of "knock the rust" off those gears as well?
Deborahsu posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 8:43am for Lost & Found - Part I
This is a nice start ... no, not "nice" ... "nice" is really too bland to mean anything at all. Let me try that again. Great start! I do look forward to what happens next. Is Hermione really in her mind, or was that a trick, or was she discharged with damage still present, but able to function on her own? How will Harry get past his love with Ginny, if Ginny keeps showing up? Is Gabrielle just trying to get into Harry's pants, or is she looking for more?
I hope we'll find out soon. AND that we'll get another chapter from SfSY soonest!
Gabrielle would LOVE to get into Harry's pants, but no, that's not what's driving this bus.
hoser41 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 5:53am for Lost & Found - Part I
I like this. It's not your typical after the war story where everybody live happily ever after. I like the tone and the pace of the story.
millercommamatt posted a comment on Monday 31st July 2006 2:44am for Lost & Found - Part I
For the record, you have the best disclaimer in the business.
I copyright all of my stories, to prevent (discourage) borrowing by others. My position is that against all the world I have a right to my stories, but that right is subordinate to JKR and her licensees.
brad posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 11:05pm for Lost & Found - Part I
Nice. *So* pleased you have Hermione recovered; "she's in her right mind again", great sentence, as was Harry's reaction. I'm hoping to see a great big reunion between the two of them and the Trio, huge hugs all 'round.
I'd asked about apparation as a means to rescue Gabrielle on your blog; I see you had that covered at the end of the chapter.
Looking forward to more, of course!
You see raw drafts on my LJ - I'd planned all of this from the beginning, but I just hadn't written it yet. I'm about three pages into the next section.
Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 3:55pm for Lost & Found - Part I
an excellent piece of work, somehow the trio of Harry, Hermione and Gabrielle seems to fit very nicely together.
Thanks so much for sharing - it is nice to see some new work, I have very much enjoyed all of your stories so far.
Cliff Bryner posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 9:05am for Lost & Found - Part I
Truly enjoyable as always. Please continue.
The Resident posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 4:42am for Lost & Found - Part I
Ok... The Song of Roland... Hmmm. Right... Sure they did. Anyway, it's a nice start. There are a lot of HP pairings I like and HPGD is one I see too seldom. You've got a good thing going and I'm eager to see where it goes. Keep up the, as always, great work.
DJ posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 12:48am for Lost & Found - Part I
Nice work I look foward to more of this story arc.
Shadow High Angel posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 12:25am for Lost & Found - Part I
Love the story, can't wait to read what comes next.
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 11:30pm for Lost & Found - Part I
This is bitter, and sweet. I like your Gabby - she rocks! :-)
The dream visit was quite nice...I like the "forks of time" explanation
I do hope to see Hermione; I like her character, and I think seeing it develop into an adult character instead of a somewhat bossy, brilliant but insecure schoolgirl is one of the best things about fanfic.
As always, reading things you write is ALWAYS worth my time.
sugarbear68 posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 11:29pm for Lost & Found - Part I
I love this! Glad to hear from you again. Harry/Gabrielle is one of the non-H/G ships I like for Harry. This sounds like a bit of fun and I can't wait to read more.
Jamie46 posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 10:54pm for Lost & Found - Part I
I like this story :) *smile* Thanks for distracting me on my last night in my apartment, when I should be cleaning. ;) hehehe
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 9:23pm for Lost & Found - Part I
Dear Kokopelli, Thanks for writing. I really enjoy all the things all of you write. I think I've read almost everything on this web site now waiting for all of you to update your "big" stories. This is a cool story line in itself. It makes sense that Harry would leave if so many of his friends were hurt or dead. He would be kicking himself for not killing Moldishorts sooner before he lost all his friends and his love. I look forward to more of this story but I am really looking forward to updates on all the big stories on this website. Thanks for another look at Potterverse. pms
csktech posted a comment on Monday 10th November 2008 2:14am for Lost & Found - Part I