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Fishburne posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 12:57pm

Blink Blink...
fed them to dementors...

Holy Hannah on a bicycle built for three.

Thats beyond brilliant.



DJ posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 11:57am

WOW I konow you said last time it was not real but that is to to bad it could be fun if it was. I will be good to see what is next.

Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 10:13am

I like this very much. I am especially enjoying trying to figure out which motives belong to whom -- and which motives we haven't seen yet.

Thanks for sharing.

Decumo9 posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 9:53am

not gonna lie, i am confused beyond confusion, therefore i await the next chapters quite eagerly.

Sheepstamper posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 7:50am

Interesting developments........

Kaerion posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 7:43am

Wow, this is turning out to be a *very* interesting fic! I wasn't really sure what to think after the first chapter, though I'm thinking that's more because you wanted to confuse us a little, than anything else, but now we're finally starting to get some answers. :)

You're doing an absolutely masterful job of showing, instead of telling, us those answers though, and making us really think to figure them out, and if you want us to look forward to the next chapters, that's definitely the right way to do it! Of the "big mysteries" that're still there (other than the ones you can't explain until the very end of the story, without ruining it), I think the biggest one is the identity of the Dreamweaver, whether or not she really is Millicent Bulstrode or just took her image for the dreams, but I'm hoping we'll get that answered when she meets up with Hermione. :)

Keep up the great work though, you're really breaking new ground when it comes to HP fanfiction, here!

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 7:06am

Wow, another great chapter here, and loving the detail that's going into it. I really look forward to what is going to happen, and what this will do when things go south as they seem to in Harry's life, and what will be the outcome of these plans.

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 6:20am

then fed the residual bits to Dementors
-Excellent idea, never thought of that

Entilzah posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 6:14am

Goodness gracious! Twists and turns... plans within plans. What a fun read!

amulder posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 5:56am

cute. wheels within wheels. cross within doublecross.

going good, John!

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 5:42am

Well as they used to say the plot thickens. I am intrigued. Thanks for writing. W.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 5:15am

Twists, turns, and convolutions. Exccellent chapter. I can see several ways it can go and sort of want most of them to happen, which is impossible.

Cheers!

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 5:11am

Hmmm. The plot thickens. :-)

We have Snape and, I'd assume, Draco Malfoy who somehow found Harry in protective coma--quite likely they attacked him in the first place.

Gretel is presumably Millie (which you spelled Milli at least once) and seems to be trying to get info about Horcruxes out of Harry for them. But then she calls, presumably, Hermione...

Good chapter, it's really got me thinking. :-)

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Amamama posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 5:05am

Ok... she's getting in touch with Hermione, I hope? Our Dreamweaver seems to be walking a tight rope, but if she manages to get Harry back to the world and Severus and possibly-Draco out of it, that would be a really good thing. I wonder how Harry will react to Millicent when he eventually wakes up and meets her for real - if that ever happens. Sneaky magic, dreamweaving, but very fascinating. Fascinating story you're cooking up here.

Cheers!

uthamm posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 4:54am

Wow! I see what you mean about more and less clear. So Harry is in some sort of coma because his 'storm shield' kicked in as a result of something Snape and Draco did to him, Millicent has contacted Hermione for the 'rescue' and Voldamort is dead? Wait, so who is Draco going to rule with? ARRGH!

Close?

Christopher Patton posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 4:37am

Incredible first two chapters so far. I have to admit that while I like both the dream story and the outside story, I am enjoying the dream story more. It is a different spin on things from what I've seen before in post-Hogwarts stories.

I'll be eagerly looking forward to more of this to come.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Monday 11th June 2007 6:23am

Harry and Millicent- an interesting and unused combination. The bit with him freezing is very confusing, but I assume all will be explained in time. Thanks for the beginning of the story.

Tom A.

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 9th June 2007 3:42am

I wasn't too sure this would be my cup of tea but as I read on I warmed to the story. I look forward to find out the twists and turns as the plot unfolds. Thanks for writing. W.

Kay posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 11:43pm

huh? nothing is as it seems? oh, man....

warpwizard posted a comment on Tuesday 5th June 2007 1:48pm

Good first chapter. You made it effortless to believe Millicent's explanation for her Hogwart's years.

Sounds like the Canadian Auror program is a bit tougher than the English one. :) /canadian