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Debbie Hollander posted a comment on Friday 1st June 2007 5:54am for The First

good story I would appreciate notices of updatesAn unusual but interesting pairing very good

JBern posted a comment on Friday 1st June 2007 4:36am for The First

I like the confusion you've inflicted on the readers. Looking forward to future chapters.~Jim

David posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 1:01pm for The First

Nothing, I repeat, nothing is as it seems in this story — bear with me a few more chapters, it will become more and less clear.



Uh-oh.

Although I have to say... Harry/Millicent is nicely done, especially for such a rare paring.

Hmm.... wonder what's to come.

freshwater posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 3:09am for The First

Intriguing start,....I'm curious to see what you have planned.

KateHC posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 2:06am for The First

You are showing us a side of Millicent that I would never have imagined. Please continue!

BJH posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 1:05am for The First

I was so enjoying the nice turn around of Millicent's character and a sweet and innocent story of healing when I suddenly recalled the first couple of paragraphs!

So where is all this headed? Is Harry remembering his time in Canada and a date with Millie or are these memories being manufactured?

I know this can't be a one shot so I will have to wait and see.

BJH

Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 12:15am for The First

Interesting so far. You explained Millicent's membership in Malfoy's group rather deftly. I'll definitely stick with you and see where this goes.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 10:31pm for The First

Wow, I know nothing is supposed to be as it seems, but, for one reason or another, I really hope that things work out between Millie and Harry, I don't know, it just seems likean offbeat pairing, but, it works in this fic.

Aaron posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 10:19pm for The First

It's an awfully real deam, if true. I'm betting on magically connected alternate universes, but then, I'm a Star Trek fan, so I can't help it.

Chris1 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 8:13pm for The First

Sounds promising. Just don't make Ginny be alive, please. It has huge angst potential, and I'd hate it ^_^

Of course, not that it matters what I think, since it's your story and all. :)

Thanks for sharing.

Chris

Sheepstamper posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 7:45pm for The First

Nice.....
Interesting..........

Sam Vere posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 7:01pm for The First

Possible spoiler warning (Depending on how close I am...)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but Harry has been found with a 'barely detectable pulse' by parties unknown (but suspected), and a 'Dreamweaver' is creating a dream of being at the academy with Millicent to attempt to diddle his loyalties...

How am I doing so far?

JoFarries posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 5:03pm for The First

I like it! Hardly anything is ever done with Millicent, she makes a good character. I'm looking forward to more!

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 4:55pm for The First

Well.

First I read the description and thought: Draco/Harry slash! Run away!

But then I remembered what the "nsns" in the URL stands for and I thought: Kokopelli does great work, and it does say Fluff. I'll give a try.

And I read it. And I enjoyed it.

And then I see again at the bottom the line: "nothing is as it seems in this story".

Which rather killed my enthusiasm, since it suggests that one of them (probably Millicent, but then "nothing is as it seems") is playing the other.

But again I remembered, Kokopelli does great work. And I trust him to not write pure, unredeemed angst. :-)

Thanks for sharing this with us.

bmatsea posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 3:53pm for The First

i'm not quite sure what happening at the begining but this is a great story

uthamm posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 2:54pm for The First

"bear with me a few more chapters, it will become more and less clear" . . You know, this is just . . .evil.

More and less clear? Good story - Millicent's line is priceless: "are you proud of all the decisions you made between 11 and 17?" Story of all our lives I'd wager. You do a great job with the obscure ships (loved Lost & Found). Looking forward to more.

Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 2:49pm for The First

Nice start! or is it a one shot? I'd like to know what was up with that bit about the cold in the beginning, as well as what the dreamweaver is and what it has to do with the rest of the story.

AutumnHeart posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 1:49pm for The First

Intriguing. I like what you've done with Millicent, and look forward to seeing where you take this.

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 12:59pm for The First

a Dreamweaver
-This is a but a dream. Poor Harry.

Excellent job with Millie! I'm glad to see you've taken up fanfic again.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 12:57pm for The First

Harry has been brainwashed and Ginny is still alive and no one knows where he is.

MPF